Yes, I had a typo. I was editing in place, and then decided that I had made some poor choices and needed to start over. I didn't bother to fix the typo.
Yes, there is a shift in point of view between the two versions. But the story is mostly written in third-person limited, and so my first version deviated from that.
But I rewrite everything every time I read it, so who knows what will happen tomorrow.
Yes, there is a shift in point of view between the two versions. But the story is mostly written in third-person limited, and so my first version deviated from that.
But I rewrite everything every time I read it, so who knows what will happen tomorrow.