So, I'll start by saying I love that you have made a thing and shipped. That's great, and the following is intended to be helpful.
I read this and understand what it is. I then went to the site and it says bathroom privacy, tells me it's version two etc.
What on earth is it! Your very first thing you show me as a new person is to tell me it's got better sound than the unknown previous item. Upgraded sound is a feature that is relevant to
1. The 250 people that bought the first one that didn't like the sound
2. Anyone who would have bought the first one, but didn't because of the sound.
Nobody else.
Assume I've not given up by now, but customers are very quick to leave with even just minor delays. I see a little radio like thing in a CGI setup. (note for later, you do have actual pictures and they don't look the same, so I don't know what I will get and that dramatically lowers my trust)
Is it a privacy device? It's for relaxing? I have to charge it every week?
I genuinely have no idea at this point what problem it is solving.
I have to go down further to figure that out.
Here's the question I have as a potential customer.
Why is my phone not enough? Or a radio? The first I already own, and plays any music I want and has speakers and absolutely has the time and the latter is incredibly cheap.
I read this and understand what it is. I then went to the site and it says bathroom privacy, tells me it's version two etc.
What on earth is it! Your very first thing you show me as a new person is to tell me it's got better sound than the unknown previous item. Upgraded sound is a feature that is relevant to
1. The 250 people that bought the first one that didn't like the sound
2. Anyone who would have bought the first one, but didn't because of the sound.
Nobody else.
Assume I've not given up by now, but customers are very quick to leave with even just minor delays. I see a little radio like thing in a CGI setup. (note for later, you do have actual pictures and they don't look the same, so I don't know what I will get and that dramatically lowers my trust)
Is it a privacy device? It's for relaxing? I have to charge it every week?
I genuinely have no idea at this point what problem it is solving.
I have to go down further to figure that out.
Here's the question I have as a potential customer.
Why is my phone not enough? Or a radio? The first I already own, and plays any music I want and has speakers and absolutely has the time and the latter is incredibly cheap.