> if you are fluent in the jargon surrounding state of the art LLMs and deep learning

It is definitely not following that jargon. Maybe it follows the tech influencer blog post jargon but I can definitively say it doesn't follow jargon used in research. Which, they are summarizing a research paper. Consequently they misinterpret things and use weird phrases like "actionable physics," which is self referential. "A" physics model is necessarily actionable. It is required to be a counterfactual model. While I can understand the rephrasing to clarify to a more general audience that's a completely different thing than "being fluent in SOTA work." It's literally the opposite...

Also, it definitely doesn't help that they remove all capitalization except in nouns.