I think you might consider changing some of your cartoons so that a Woman is running the business. I think it's a bit strange[1] that it's the male character all the time.
I don't know if that's something that might turn off a woman, but it did sort of jump out at me.
[1]Full Disclosure:I only browsed through a few pages, I did not to a page by page gender analysis.
I don't know if that's something that might turn off a woman, but it did sort of jump out at me.
[1]Full Disclosure:I only browsed through a few pages, I did not to a page by page gender analysis.